fireflies

fireflies
Current mood: romantic

Fireflies dance under starry skies
moonlight reflected in my lovers eyes.
soft summer breeze as he swayed with me
then he carved our initials in that old oak tree.

We lay in the grass and spoke of love
and pondered the meaning of the stars above.
we talked until the sun it rose
he counted the freckles upon my nose.

Happiness was tangible for me at last
all the sorrow I'd felt was in the past.
in his arms I felt the comfort of home
as familiar as an oft read tome.

His voice still soft upon my ear,
words of love so sweet and dear,
Then sunlight pierced the silent room
stabbing through blinds to a sullen tomb.

And I awoke to reality
for it was all a dream, you see.
A wonderful dream of a starry night
when all the world was soft and bright.

Possibilities seemed endless, and worries few
when you had me, and I had you.



myspace comments:

Belladonna	"Possibilities seemed endless, and worries few when you had me, and I had you." *sigh* Now that's just beautiful. *more sighs* Go back to dreaming, baby, because sometimes they do come true. xxx Posted by Belladonna on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 5:25 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	♥buttmuffin♥	not in my life they don't Posted by ♥buttmuffin♥ on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 6:09 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	Belladonna	Just wait and believe. You wouldn't write such beautiful poems if you didn't still, just a little bit anyway. Posted by Belladonna on May 5, 2008 - Monday at 12:02 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	jimmy	You have great country singer potential :) Posted by jimmy on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 5:29 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	♥buttmuffin♥	*angry face* Posted by ♥buttmuffin♥ on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 6:09 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	Rhoda Whitehorse	Mmmm. Yeah. *SIGH* Posted by Rhoda Whitehorse on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 5:27 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	♥buttmuffin♥	yeah *sigh* *eats more chocolate* Posted by ♥buttmuffin♥ on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 6:09 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	N£@L£Y S@N£	like it Jules, its better than my poems.....never knew you were a poetress as well!! Bet you can't juggle balls like i can though ;-) Posted by N£@L£Y S@N£ on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 5:36 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	♥buttmuffin♥	you flatter me neale, but yes I have lots more sad poems in the archives, and funny ones as well. :) And I juggle kittens, not balls. Posted by ♥buttmuffin♥ on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 6:06 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	Rhoda Whitehorse	Somehow i think shes likely to be an expert ball juggler... Posted by Rhoda Whitehorse on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 5:45 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	♥buttmuffin♥	*raises eyebrow* Posted by ♥buttmuffin♥ on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 6:06 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	Tracy	Wonderful job, Jules! Love it so. Dreams are great. They don't cost us anything...nothing lost. Posted by Tracy on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 6:04 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	♥buttmuffin♥	:) Posted by ♥buttmuffin♥ on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 6:07 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	Chilli	Your poetry always seems very honest to me, nice one Jules. Beautiful and sad imagery, you made me think, took me on a journey about my past loves. I think it's something if you touch others and make them think .. "yeah .. I know that feeling." P.S. Easy on the "touching others" ;) Posted by Chilli on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 6:55 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	♥buttmuffin♥	Thank you Chilli your comments are always very special to me :) *touches Chilli* *oooh you've been working out havent you?* Posted by ♥buttmuffin♥ on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 6:59 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	arsebiscuit	I can't create enough accounts to award enough kudos. Posted by arsebiscuit on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 8:31 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	♥buttmuffin♥	oh c'mon ric, give it a try. Posted by ♥buttmuffin♥ on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 8:33 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	Doug	Not really a poem kind of guy but I really liked this one. keep on writing you should try and get some of these published. Posted by Doug on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 8:39 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	♥buttmuffin♥	nah I'm not interested in fortune and fame, just on myspace :P thanks doug you are a good friend :) Posted by ♥buttmuffin♥ on May 4, 2008 - Sunday at 8:43 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	Baz	That's very appealing to me. Well done you! Posted by Baz on May 5, 2008 - Monday at 1:43 AM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	♥buttmuffin♥	aw shucks baz I always appreciate nice comments from you because you are one of the few people who seem to be totally BS free. LOL. :) Posted by ♥buttmuffin♥ on May 5, 2008 - Monday at 5:38 AM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	Chickwah	*sighs* mmmmmmmmmmmm, yes! I remember that feeling! Well done, you, for capturing that so well! Posted by Chickwah on May 5, 2008 - Monday at 5:31 AM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	♥buttmuffin♥	Must be nice to remember that feeling... I have only experienced it in dreams. thanks sweetie. :) Posted by ♥buttmuffin♥ on May 5, 2008 - Monday at 5:37 AM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	Lorraine	Jules, you've made my mascara run... Posted by Lorraine on May 5, 2008 - Monday at 6:14 AM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	♥buttmuffin♥	Oh sweetie, don't you know us pathetic people should always wear waterproof mascara?? Posted by ♥buttmuffin♥ on May 5, 2008 - Monday at 6:18 AM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	♥laurie♥	so pretty, jules....i can almost feel the breeze, smell the grass and hear the buzzing of little firefly wings. :) Posted by ♥laurie♥ on May 6, 2008 - Tuesday at 11:09 AM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	♥buttmuffin♥	its even better when you hear jimmy reading it. Posted by ♥buttmuffin♥ on May 6, 2008 - Tuesday at 11:38 AM [Remove] [Reply to this]

	arsebiscuit	Since you deleted me and I can't comment on your page or latest blog, I'll say it here... I'm in love with you Jules and I don't care who knows it! Posted by arsebiscuit on May 8, 2008 - Thursday at 2:45 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]

♥buttmuffin♥

Since you proclaimed this, I give your current profile a life span of 2 days. then *poof* this comment will be responding to nothingness. How poetic. Posted by ♥buttmuffin♥ on May 9, 2008 - Friday at 3:48 PM [Remove] [Reply to this]